Michael Purcell
Eng. 11 B55
Holly Pappas
The fish keeping forum experience.
I’m not really sure what people think of a forum, nevermind what they think of a fish keeping forum. This one is like any forum; it has all of the same components that make it what it is. The people on the forums are the ones who make the forum the way it is. You have a wide variety and demographic. In the next coming paragraphs I’m going to take you for a ride through the ins and outs of Monsterfishkeepers.com by explaining some of the groups of people who make what it is.
I would like to start off by introducing myself, I am crenipterus svenagalus, my username comes from a mixture of two of my favorite fish’ names. Crenicichla Sveni and Polypterus Senegalus. I mixed the two names to be unique, a lot of usernames on this site are Latin names of fish, but only one is a mixture of two. I have been an active member of Monsterfishkeepers.com since June of 2007. The website was recommended to me by a friend so I could ask questions and get answers and not bother him anymore. I guess sometime before I started using the site I bothered him frequently for his knowledge.
When I first started on the site, I was considered a n00b. A n00b is someone who typically uses awful grammar, asks dumb questions that they themselves could answer with a bit of research, and seem to get quite offended when people try to help them. The word n00b originally used in online gaming to refer to someone who was new to the game and wasn’t very good. It was later adapted to forums, blogs, instant messaging and in many other online communities. It is spelled like that as a “Secret code” so other people unfamiliar with the language couldn’t understand it. I’m not afraid to admit it, I was totally a n00b. My grammar was terrible. As far as I’m concerned, I wasn’t that bad. Some people are almost impossible to understand. You see questions like “ my fish is dieing y whats lyke wrong wit it help plz” At least my typing was legible and understandable. These people who type like this generally get offended when you ask them to clean up there grammar a bit to make it easier for everyone else to understand. It’s a whole lot easier to help someone when you can understand the question or problem. The usual response is something like this “i lyke how i tipe leaf me alone mine ur busness” They think we are out to get them or something, when in reality, we want to help. N00bs typically ask for help, and if they don’t get the answer they’re looking for in five minutes they will ask over and over and annoy everyone. For the most part all the n00b has to do is type in the question on Google, and presto! The answer they were looking for is in one of the first three links.
I’m glad to report, that I am not a n00b anymore. I have taken steps to make my posts look more educated and I now type like an adult. I would say now that I fall into a class of people who don’t really rely on anyone else unless there is no other way of getting an answer other than asking. Sometimes peoples personal experiences account for more than some of the generic information on the web. I try to do as much research by myself as possible. Why take up bandwidth if you don’t have to? There is an ample amount of information to be found; sometimes it just takes a bit of time before you come across it. Some people (n00bs) just can’t find any time in their day to look up this info. They are too busy playing Xbox or watching TV. I like being self sufficient. I also like the other people on the site that are too. Doing something for yourself and accomplishing it is so much more rewarding than being annoying and childish.
The next group of people are the Mods (Short for Moderator.). These are kind of like the Police of the website. They make sure everything is running smooth behind the scenes. They give infractions for wrong doings, clean up useless posts, and are generally the most helpful and knowledgeable. They always have great insight and inspirational posts. They truly want to help you and make you a better fish keeper so you can enjoy the hobby as much as they do. Like anyone in an authority position though, some tend to abuse their power. They are quick to jump down your throat or give infractions. Lately though, a lot of the power hungry Mods have been relieved of their duties. The other Mods have seen some of the rash judgments and had a meeting. It was decided that a few of them just weren’t cut out for the job.
Another group of people would be the post whores. These people will go in any thread and post responses such as “cool” or every ones favorite, “wow.” These people are convinced that the more posts you have the smarter you are. They say things like I have 2,000 posts, so I know what I’m talking about, if confronted about something. Most of the time that isn’t the case, the majority of post whores are also n00bs, n00bs that post a lot, instead of researching or learning. There are a number of people on the site that have high posts counts but actually contribute. Again, why take up the bandwidth with nonsense?
In any society, you have different people who account for different roles in the society. On this online forum it is no different. Some of the people contribute greatly to the community, others are as useless as a kettle made of ice or a kickstand on a submarine. Some people are self sufficient and very rarely bother people, but we all account for the community. Even if some people don’t do anything important, sometimes they’re at least good for a good laugh. These are a few of the types of people you can find on Monsterfishkeepers.com. There are more, but these are the ones that seem the most important and most common to me. I hope I made things apparent for you, like you could create an account and automatically know who was worth consulting, and who was useless.
I think that the main point that the writer seems to be making is how this website is being used as a cyber culture for people. In other words the website is treated like a physical area, and there are different types of people that are given certain names. The only thing I don't really understand is the importance of grammar. I mean I get it if he wants to talk about his own writing, but I don't see what that has to do with another culture. Maybe you could add in more detail about grammar.
ReplyDeleteThere is one other issue that I would like to point out is that besides posting the websites name, I don't see how you could have observed anyone. I mean all you really talked about were what the people are called and what the website is for. But you did write what they talked about. If you did then I didn't see it. Aside of that, everything looks really well done.
I think that the organization pattern is well done. I don't know what type of pattern it is, but I'm not complaining. I think that it's very effective. I can't suggest any other alternative.
Michael--
ReplyDeleteAn interesting subculture indeed! Yr classification scheme works fine as organizaiton (though you might make the structure clear ealrier in the essay).
Things to consider for revision:
I'd start with the line "Let me introduce myself. I am crenipterus svenagalus," then explain about the forum. (Just a suggestion--take it or leave it, but work at "sparkling" up the introduction in some way.)That naming convention certainly is an interesting aspect of the subculture!
What's the deal with the grammar (revealing one as a n00b)--I didn't realize online forums worried about that, or do you mean somehting other than grammar in English-teacher sense?--maybe add examples of n00b questions? and maybe example(s) of some questions you found answers to yourself?
Examples of moderators' helpfulness? I'd like to see a litle more clearly the types of questions people ask and information that's exchanged. Do members post photos, for example? Is the site just a list of discussion board type posts or is there more info? (I'll check it out myself...)
Conclusion could be pruned a little, I think.
after i check ut the site may have some other suggesitons...